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I tried this using my own methods
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Sta.sh
Thanks
Honestly, and maybe this is more opinionated than critique, because I like fractal type art, I didn't notice the woman at first, I was drawn to the flame geometry. For what it's worth, that's what caught my initial attention and if that's what you wanted to "speak" for the art, you did a great job!.
I really like the choice of B/W for this, because the words give it's own feel/impression and the B/W treatment lets the 'imagination's color' run with it.
Composition wise, the design and geometry keeps the focus in the center for me, although it really shouldn't by it's geometry, it does because of your wonderful job with the lighting, shadow and sharpness fade from the center out. Very intricate and thought out, as far as I'm concerned. I look at this from the eye of an artist and a photographer at the same time and I am impressed with your execution of "less is more". You really did a great job with this, no bias or BS in my eyes!
The only thing I would have changed would be more sharpness in the center towards the bottom for the flame. I believe you did it this way so as not to obstruct the lettering, but you could have sharpened it a bit more, IMO, and gotten away with it.
Again, great job!!!
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